Poetry / love (Analysis)
Heart of stone
lack of bones
to puncture and break
in these times of discord
I bellow out to you
Take me away from you.
Steel traps like mind
slice through my wrists
I long for the cold touch
of lies and bold love.
That I called to you everyday
is but a long lost memory
washed up by sandy tunes
and nonsense rhymes
that crumbles a heart of stone
in this cold memory
of make believe love.
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