Poetry / At This Very Moment... (Analysis)

At this very moment…
Someone, somewhere is
Jumping for joy;
Crying their eyes out;
Giving birth;
Being born;
Taking their last breath.

At this very moment…
Someone, somewhere is
Taking their first step;
Taking their last;
Falling in love;
Making love;
Making a friend;
Being betrayed;
Being defended;
Losing a loved one;
Completely at peace;
In complete turmoil;
In ecstasy;
In agony.

At this very moment…
Someone, somewhere is
Jumping in the ocean;
Running away from their mistakes;
Hugging their best friend;
Feeling completely alone in the world;
Learning the meaning of the term “God”;
Learning what Hell is like;
Living in Hell.

At this very moment…
Someone, somewhere is
Painting their fingernails;
Pumping iron;
Wondering about their future;
Reliving their past;
Fighting;
Dying.

At this very moment…
Someone, somewhere is
Suffering great pain;
Finding real comfort;
Watching a movie;
Reading a book;
Driving;
Bicycling;
On a cruise;
On a plane.

Each day is filled with the wonders of life,
For each of us, in our turn.
Cherish these moments and let them unfold,
For the lessons we can learn.

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June 04, 2008

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June 04, 2008

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pure mind candy, at least for me.it took me everywhere, smacking me in the face, stroking my emotions, taking me everywhere, a mental imprint i will always have…
i hope this isn’t your only piece posted…