Poetry / Dear Sky Why Do You Cloud? (Analysis)
When I awake
My cheek is not warmed
My face is not warmed
My heart is not warmed.
When I look outside
I do not see far
I do not see clear
I do not see light
When I go out
Eyes do not shine
Lakes do not shine
Sun does not shine
They say to me, “look
the air is warm
the sun it shines.”
I look
and see only my heart.
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