Poetry / Easy To Hate

“I don’t hate you.
I wish I did though.
It would be easy to hate you.
So easy.
What makes things hard is that I don’t.
I hate what you did.
I hate how you ruined everything.
I hate how it’s so easy for you to hide what you feel.
I hate how it’s so easy for you to find comfort.
I hate how you’ve found her,
And I’m still trying to find me.”

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May 28, 2008

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hey you!

I really like this piece. I Think that you should go on with your feelings a little more. Like get into depth of how your heart is feeling and how he made you feel… i really like this tho!

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