Criticism / change

America how I hate thee
I wish there never was

You killed everyone
and you still kill

for love of money
for love of power

America you kill the environment
the polar bears

you kill the children

America is not a nation
it is a corruption
and it needs change

America needs hope
not oil

If it were not for America
the world would be better off

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July 02, 2008

Weaver

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July 01, 2008

malevolent

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100	F	Djibouti	October 03

malevolent reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

Oh this is good, I almost wouldn’t have got it if you didn’t make it so clear in your intro. The O at the end makes me think of Opera, which is also very funny in its own way. Yea I agree CHANGE! I heard a funny one from the p-diddy loser, he said “Obama of Die.” This was pretty damn funny, to bad its true.

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June 27, 2008

Jeremythegreatshow

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23	M	Nashua, NH	September 30

Jeremythegreatshow reviewed Version 2 - Read 100% of the Item

wow very surprising someone that hates America…you don’t say. Ive never heard that one before. It’s not like we don’t hear that from other parts of the world everyday. You are truly stumbling across something new…run with it

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June 24, 2008

Auran

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I agree with you completely on how America is a polluted nation in the sense of corrupted. However, America isn’t the only nation that has become plagued with corruption. The whole world is tainted by it. America is a diverse country, a very young but strong. America’s population contains residents of people from different continents. We are all mixed together on one continent. America is merely a breeding place for violence, corruption, and other unmentionables. It brings everything together. The meaning of America doesn’t exist. It’s known as a free nation, but that isn’t true. Nobody will ever be completely true anywhere on earth. We live in a hypocritical system that is nearly impossible to defeat. When one obstacle is conquered, another appears in it’s place.

_Auran