Poetry / Losing All Along (Analysis)
Look up. That’s her.
Queen of the clouds.
Majesty of the mountains.
You can be anything you wannabe, here.
The rivers flow with your feet.
The venom lies in you veins.
The grass is green and trees tremble.
The summer’s breathe is breathing.
Knight will fall, here’s your prince.
Cupid’s craving Chinese children.
Colors combine. See black, your blind.
Banned, breathless, breathing, broken.
Attack your back.
Sell your soul, this is hell.
Kiss and tell, karma’s triggered.
Forget the world. Who would of figured?
Sleep will slaughter, story book’s slumber.
Fairy tales forgotten, fangs, famished.
Farris wheel. The world is rolling of your tongue.
Your throat is bleeding. Lungs collapse.
Pills piled piercing pen.
Stabbing, softly sunken sea.
Ships sail through you and me.
Reality is only a flashback.
Comeback. You’re black and blue.
Breathe in, now out. Your voice is a shout.
Rain will rush, adrenaline added.
Head warped, winding, waving.
Jinx, your joking. Drama’s dropping.
Heart stops stopping.
Horizons await. Give and take.
Your future’s found.
One forward, two back.
It’s where you began. You lost the track.
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