Poetry / i'll never learn (Analysis)

You have much learning ahead of you in the art of polishing your words. Still, you made me feel, so you have something real to polish. Nice effort.

I think that this is a bit jumbled, but nonetheless a good read and good tale of unrequited love.

i think you express your feelings really well. im not too sure exactly what it is about. i am thinking its some woman that you have strong feelings for but she has a man already, or maybe some woman you’re involved with who has a man already, im intrigued….

Good Rhyme and Reason. High ratings!

I liked it alot.  Just one continuous rant or a poem.  I think you may want to look into investing into a bit more puncuation. Not alot more.  Just maybe comma or two.  Sometimes when a writer writes a poem like this, or is prone to using long winding sentences, some of the best lines can be overlooked or devalued, because there is no stopping so that the words don’t resonate as deep.  

Ever so true so dude I agree with you I felt like this before don’t you worry so I can relate to this on many levels.

Your right words mean, but people on here dont always look passed the obvious, I think what you’ve written is great. Keep up the good work

Amy