Lyrics / Darkest Secrets (Analysis)

I think that was a bauetiful poem, with a very clear meaning. you should definitely consider going deeper onthis subject you could atteact a lot of publishers.

wow, im amazed!!! great lyrics, and funny how one of my friends matches this…hm

Have you got an agent to promote your material? if you haven’t, then you should have! its good stuff

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May 19, 2008

by RascalRuss

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I respect and appreciate your judgment, poetking. I’d like an agent referral from you. I self-published and sold out of two poetry books over 30 years ago. Now, perhaps I can find an agent?

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I like it and the first thought that came to my mind for some weird reason was a song by Billy Idol= She’s Shooting stars…Maybe you can contact them…
Could you tell me how you got your poetry published please let me know I am new to this.

This would be an excellent song, something slightly country or maybe sad jazz. You should definitely pursue trying to find a songwriter to work with you on this. I can’t wait to heart it set to music.

This is good.  The verses were easy to understand and the descriptions made you understand what this young girl had gone through.  To me it’s sound like good lyrics for a country song.

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As I read this I wondered what form of music would be with it.  I loved it.  The story was understandable and so true.  

hi there,

i don’t know about publishing etc. cause it’s hard to break into the biz unless you have the finacial backing, but any way this floes nice and you have a consisent story line and ryhming pattern throughout the song..it’s well written,,nice job,,jim

I enjoyed reading this very much as I felt your lyrics were very intense and raw.  I felt they really showed frea emotion.

These lyrics seem to portray a tragic girl who seems to have pieced her life back together on her own… yet there is still a need for a ‘dashing prince’ to sweep her off her feet. It seems to direct a round-of-applause factor to the narrator rather than to the girl who survived the life trials in the first place.