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Lyrics / There Ain't Nothing
I been a ramblin’ and a rollin’,
Just a walkin’ away,
So far from the home I once knew.
In the wind I hear a callin’
From some sweet yesterday,
Callin’ me back to you.
There ain’t nothin’ – ain’t nothin’-
Like my sweet baby’s lovin!
If I could just hold him again,
I’d do nothin’ – no nothin’-
But hold him and love him,
And that would be my heaven.
I seen some beauty and some treasure,
I seen rich men and wise men,
And I’ve done about all I can do.
And when men ask me about pleasure,
I just ask them to listen,
And then I tell them the story of you.
There ain’t nothin’ – ain’t nothin’-
Like my sweet baby’s lovin!
If I could just hold him again,
I’d do nothin’ – no nothin’-
But hold him and love him,
And that would be my heaven.
Oh my darlin’, oh my baby’,
If you’d just let me come home,
I promise I’d always be true.
I tell you certain – no maybes-
I never would roam,
If I could come home to you.
There ain’t nothin’ – ain’t nothin’-
Like my sweet baby’s lovin!
If I could just hold him again,
I’d do nothin’ – no nothin’-
But hold him and love him,
And that would be my heaven.
Yes that would be my heaven.
Oh yes, he would be my heaven.
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hutch reviewed Version 1 -
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It was good I like that country feel to it
Alot of love in that.
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TiffVicious reviewed Version 1 -
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Obviously I imagine this as a country song. I love the lyrics. They are perfect the way they are, I wouldn’t change a thing. This is so beautiful and something a lot of people can relate to.
shaneoryan reviewed Version 1 -
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I really do enjoy these lyrics. This actually reminds me of something that could be sung by Taylor Swift or Carrie Underwood. The word choice definitely speaks about a song for the ‘country’ genre.
“And when men ask me about pleasure,
I just ask them to listen,
And then I tell them the story of you.”
The sense of longing and love for this man is heightened by the above verse. You introduced your feelings with a bang and made them more intense at the perfect moment in the song.
“I’d do nothin’ – no nothin’-
But hold him and love him,
And that would be my heaven.
Yes that would be my heaven.
Oh yes, he would be my heaven.”
The ending of this song would break hearts and lift them at the same time. Sure, you only change one word each sentence, but the one word left out changes the meaning. Should this be turned into a song, it would most likely be found on my iPod. Great job!
KJEghdami reviewed Version 1 -
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Definitely blues.
Nice beat, keep singin’.
wma119 reviewed Version 1 -
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it fits the country genre more so. it is good i liked it. it established a balance of simplicity and heartfelt emotion. i write poetry and lyrics and have been in bands so i think musically when it comes to lyrics. i like this because i can see a fit. i see the blues in the chorus. i think i would like to hear how you would arrange melodically along with music. its good
DByron reviewed Version 1 -
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I love this. It’s honest, grounded, and storied. It doesn’t over-extend or impose itself. It feels comfortable and has that classic blues-country longing, and I swear I can hear Reba M doing this with a bare-bones band unplugged.
Great job.
Byron
crimsonarchon reviewed Version 1 -
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This would make for a pretty sweet contemporary country song.
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