Poetry / I Support (Analysis)

I respectfully disagree. I think this is an argument in the guise of a poem. But then again, alot of really good poetry is exactly that. Nice effort. I enjoyed it.

I love “We do not pick apart your lives, nor desecrate your names, so maybe you can take a hint, and simply do the same.”

It is so true and I love how you worded it!!
Great piece.

nice : ]  i like it, and even without your information in the information i could see that it was about “glb”  nice outlook on the lifestyle and thoughts, now if only more people would act this way towards this group of people.  
by the way – i am bisexual. so thanks for the support!!

Short, concise and very much needed to be aired. Though not gay, I have several friends who are and i certainly can agree with all that you’ve penned here. While I can honestly say that I don’t think that gays have any more chance of a lasting relationship than heterosexuals, I also am aware of the fact that they have been and to a large degree still are demonized by the general populace. It is a sad state of affairs (no pun intended) when people focus on an individual’s orientation rather than on the person for “who” they are and “what” they have to offer society.

You poem speaks the truth, the simple truth, which ought to be hard for anyone with n open mind to argue with. Keep up the worthwhile subject matter! Bravo!

this is interesting…but i have absolutely no idea what you are talking about. but it is interesting to take this and apply it to my own life, good job!

I like the voice and images. The only stumble I had was at “quiet intentions”. That’s a lot of syllables and “quiet” doesn’t feel like it goes with “intentions”. I like it over all, though.

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April 25, 2008

by Ocean_Avenue16

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well in that I felt I wanted to make the statement that “we” don’t want to brag or boast, we just want equality and less discrimination.

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I didnt understand the rhyming scheme,

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there really wasn’t one.

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Beautiful. Love is love regardless…

Your words “We love each other for who we are/we love each other always” are very strong and determined. I enjoyed this poem.