Lyrics / She said (Analysis)
She said she would lose all the favors
Nows she’s gonna die
She said she would learn to walk faster
And now look where she lies
You dont need anything from me
Oxygen is a luxury
Forgotten by all those who hate her
Tonight we’re gonna burn it up
A poll had been taken, who’d save her?
And there were no hands to raise up
Lost in the moment she hurt me
She doesnt know that id never save
I hope to god she knows what i felt
But then she cant because she’s in her grave
I stole back my heart
I had to rip it back apart
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Very odd lyrics, but good. I enjoyed them overall, would of been nice to be happy and know that she lived. I loved your last two lines.
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I believe that you have hit the mark you were aimming for. This is a very dark brooding piece. It’s not really to my taste, but it is well written. I do like the line, “Lost in the moment she hurt me.” Thank you for sharing this!
It’s Great! Might want to review the last two lines they seem a bit lost in the piece – the rest seems very powerful. Good Luck!!!!
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