Lyrics / "HOW IN THE WORLD"

i liked it made me chuckle

The words tell a tale of a common predicament, the lonely man unsure of love—how to go about finding it; then how to deal with it when it arrives all of a sudden, unable to understand the how or where of its appearance. This makes it easy to relate to and draws the listener in.

The problem for me is that you make a jump from informal nervous contact (”...I spilled my beer”) to hot and heavy romance (“Her arms hold me every night”) with no indication of a connection being made, beyond her smile (“Her smile helped me stop shaking”). How about a hint as to what attracts her? His eyes? Voice? Quiet manner that she takes for aloof confidence? I think we need something to cement the formation of the relationship.

Thanks for the read.

  How In The World, how in this world
  Could such a pretty girl
  Fall in love with me
  How In The World, how in this world
  Could such a lovely girl
  Fall in love with a guy like me

I like the smooth way the lyric shifts into the chorus
this looks like you have worked on this one for a while .

this is good one , keep it

lookingbeyond

Great song; I really liked it.

This is a nice sentiment. The lyrics are good in spots and just okay in others, but I like the story behind the story. My only recommendation would be to address some of the rhyming words that struck me as a bit hokey “holy cow” and “bow wow” unless they fit the idea you were driving at, of course.

I believe that this is a light hearted did at oneself that works very well. Its cute.. although I am not sure that you would like your song described as ‘cute’ but that is what i found it to be. I only suggest that in your review notes you mention the genre of the song.. for eg: love song/pop/rock etc.. that might help with reviewing it.
Thanks for sharing.

intricate but simple. I am blown away by your successful attempt at reaching through the screen and grabing the readers attn.

at first it was sorta like a country song to me then more towards the middle its like a pop song. its good, just try and work on words for like one genre of music.

I love these lyrics. Most of us feel inadequate in our lives at some point in time, especially when it comes down to companionship. I have ruin many relationships just by the mere fact of thinking how in the world do they even like me. Something must be wrong with them. I absolutely love this, you put words to a feeling many people can’t express. AWESOME!!!

This is nice. Not really something that I myself enjoy but I could see, targeted at the right audience, with a very snappy tune could be a success. Definitley would have to be a pop song, to light for anything else. I would suggest going back and trimming up some of the lines to make it more of a flow.  ” Or turn a girl’s head on sight ” has got to go in my opinion, way too forced sounding. keep at it