Short Story / Blind Bravery

I cannot see the letters on this keyboard. The R looks like a B. The B looks like a P. I click the space button with insecurities. A period leaving a sentence behind that I can only guess is right. I click the backspace button five times before I get one whole word down on this piece of digital paper.
I press enter. I press tab. I start a new part of the story bringing all of my insecurities with me causing my ultimate failure in this paper. When you cannot see the letters you move on blind, and hope that one day you can find your glasses.

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June 05, 2008

clele75

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April 16, 2008

MaximumCarnage

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25	M	Kenosha, WI	May 13

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This is a good start. I like your metaphor. One grammtaical error near the end, “blind and hope”, just get rid of the and. And the hope. Just kidding, Keep the hope. If you are able to beef this up at all, I recommend it.