Lyrics / insight (Analysis)

Seems to be soemthing that sounds better than it’s written. lol. I almost wish urbis had someway to allow us to hear it.
I like the rhymes though ^^ And the line about “minutes take hurs and those hour heal”

Wow, this is amazing. I love these lyrics! You can really feel everything it says, trully beautiful!

This could have been better with a little more imagery involved other than that it warmed the heart and sound like it would be a good song when sung.

I like this alot. However, I suggest that you rewrite this with a chorus as your foundation to the lyrics based on the title of the song. This becomes the backbone to the whole song.

This is a great verse….”but in love we can get through anything, lots of angels, god gives many wings, but then he made you; an even better thing”

I am not looking at the punctuation but you will need to clean up the spelling and punctuation if you ever want to have this considered professionally.

A sweet poem, you need to proofread though.  I liked it. thank you

Good so far the words run quite well, you should publish this into a song.

I like this. it’s a decent piece of work. However, what I think you could do would be to put in the line breaks where they should be. I think it could be a lot clearer that way.