Poetry / onaplane (Analysis)

So let’s all tune in…
....at 12:30 AM.  

i am here again…
wandering…
....pondering.

reflecting on all the things
that were said…

....it is like being put in a box,
or being a Genie in a vase…
confined…
....with so many possibilities in mind.

I would like to ignore those senses that have kept me safe,
and whole…

I would like to sleep a night…
I would like to sleep a night…
I would like to daydream about sleeping tonight….

this is the point where I take a drink…

light a smoke…

cloud the room
in a purple haze…

it is now 12:34…

at 4:00AM,
I will put the Makers Mark I drank aside…
....Get Dressed,
                       Take a Walk…
                                          ....and start another day.

It doesn’t matter though…
It turns out the same
no matter what I do…
anyway.

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September 26, 2008

apb148

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apb148 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

you have done a great job. keep it up.

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