Haiku/Senryu / Gym Girl (Analysis)

Fantastic.  Great imagery, great spelling!  I wouldn’t change a thing.  Really pulls the reader in and probably reminds many of similar situations.

As far as sound goes I like the second line, though the image is a little cliche. I’m not sure I understand the last line. I thought maybe, since it’s “Gym Girl” that “Crunch” referred to doing crunches or some kind of ab-working machine? If that’s the case, though then it’s a little unclear and sounds a bit awkward. I’m also wondering why “Crunch” is capitalized.

It is a bit confusing – I get that you cant face her but I get the feeling it is because she is mean or bullys you.

One girl I can’t face,
Tall, lean, sexy long legs but mean,
Makes want her more.

This is a way to word it so it is understood that you like her. Quick question, what is crunch?

I don’t know much about Senryu but I can say that the word choice here is pretty good. The way you describe the girl is effective but I am lost by the last line.

IT SEEMS LIKE, EVEN THOOUGH YOU CAN’T FACE HER SHE STILL INSPIRES YOU TO A CERTAIN DEGREE

My son has gone through that same situation,therefore I understand.
You might get rid of either the word ‘tall’ or ‘long legs’ as it is repeating the same thing.Other than that,I have no more criticism for you.