Haiku/Senryu / Fuzzy bear (Analysis)

Wow great job perfect haiku format 5-7-5 ..I like the cute words used…it was great i liked it.

Perfect job of using the form to present a complete picture.  Thanks!  I’ve read quite a few today that didn’t come close to serving the purpose of haiku.  =)

Cute. Very nice for a youngster.

It fits the 5-7-5 scheme but you could do better. Its cute and I cant wait to read more of your stuff.

It’s a very cute description. It made me smile for the first time today. It’s probably been pointed out quite a few times, but you might want to start each line with a Cappital letter. It doesnt detract from it either way. Good job.

Brilliant haiku, evoking childhood fuzziness. I like this haiku for its simplicity and fuzzy-wuzziness. I think it is cute and I would feel happy letting my daughter read it! Innocent and simple, so straight tens.

This is warm and overall, I think a really cute haiku.
You’ve followed the basic rule for the syllables.
I just think you should have begun the haiku with capitalization. Just a little thing. No big deal.
Nice work, keep it up.