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Poetry / New Page

A conversation, an old wound healed
In so few words, so much revealed
A weight I’ve carried for so many years
And put to rest so many needless fears
The dawn of a new day, something to build on
Hope for the future, my hatred is gone
Brand new outlook, so much hope
Learn how to fly, no longer just cope

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April 06, 2008

Icarus_in_Asbestos

No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
67	90.0% (10 votes)	29.7%

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Icarus_in_Asbestos reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

I liked this. It comes off as a celebration of sorts for new opportunities, and I could feel the weight of years of uncertainty being lifted off of your shoulders as I read this. I could see the truth in your words born from emotion, and you conveyed that emotion well.

I’m also a sucker for poems that rhyme. What can I say?