Poetry / I Never Meant To

I never meant to cause you problems
I never meant to anger you
I never meant to meet you
I never meant to fall in love with you
I never meant to care for you
I never meant to hold you tight
I never meant to dream of you at night
I never meant to annoy you
I never meant to stress you out
I never meant to think of you
I never meant to figure you out
I never meant to look at you
I never meant to break us up
Cause I never meant to care . . .
I don’t wanna care anymore . . .

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March 27, 2008

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nice, i like it/ a lot of repitition. ut gets your point across. im going to fore warn you now though. i like this piece but im sure you will get some bad reviews because some people hate repitition.  keep up the good work and remember it doesnt matter what others think of your pieces. what matters is how it makes you feel when you read and write it.

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