Poetry / Taylor Marie

A short piece that is very blunt.

It’s short bluntness is what makes it unique..

It’s almost like a slap in the face, with a few gentle dashes of poetry mixed in.

It’s a nice thought…but is it a poem? It sounds like the beginning of a memorial speech about this person. To make it a poem I think you have to add some imagery.

I don’t know, it didn’t work for me, the flow was jerky and I couldn’t get onto the imagery, it seems to have little to no depth, I’m sorry but I must be honest.

This is beautiful.

I would only suggest deleting the ”...”s just for aesthetics.

I really liked that poem, short but I really liked it. I thought it had a nice flow to it and the words fit nicely together. I liked how you started off the poem “Glimmering smiles, Laughter cherished, Ardent love for humanity.” Overall, I enjoyed this poem and would like to read more. Hope to read more soon! Keep up the good work.