Haiku/Senryu / IFO

I like it! The Spaceship peice is an intresting approch(bad spelling).
But like you stated it could be.. one of the other you just never know.. the unknown.. Well atleast I dont.. Great Peice! I enjoyed this..

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March 08, 2008

by Harold_P

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Thanks angelauddie2107… nice having your opinion again.

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  I find it humerous that this haiku reads like a joke with a punch line.  

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March 05, 2008

by Harold_P

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Me too. Let’s laugh together! Har har!

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A very interesting senryu. Bordering on cosmic. I like the visual clarity this evokes. Well written.

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March 04, 2008

by Harold_P

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Thanking you, metaku.

March 05, 2008

by metaku

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Urbis loves you.
Your work is unparalleled.
Thank You, Harold_P

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I just figured out what the title meant, Identified Flying Object.  Aliens are sick as hell, way to make Haiku’s futuristic.  I think this is really creative.  I doubt the ancient japanese ever suspected their poetry would be continued through the 21st century.

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March 04, 2008

by Harold_P

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A haiku/senryu should attempt to provoke deep pensive thought. Job done, guv’nor. Up the Japanese.

March 05, 2008

by mikeseed

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I don’t like most haiku’s but this is a good one.  do you mind if i put this piece in my favorites?

March 05, 2008

by mikeseed

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I don’t like most haiku’s but this is a good one.  do you mind if i put this piece in my favorites?

March 05, 2008

by mikeseed

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I don’t like most haiku’s but this is a good one.  do you mind if i put this piece in my favorites?

March 05, 2008

by Harold_P

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Feel free. Add it three time if you want as well!

March 05, 2008

by mikeseed

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sorry about that.  my computer freezes up sometimes and i must have hit post too many times.

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I have no idea why this made me laugh so hard. The fact that it was a natural reaction says good things about this poem. It is modern and quite dark. A spaceship seems like such a more horrendous item to be falling from the sky. All of man’s efforts at technological advance falling to decay. Good show…I hope I didn’t over think it :)

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March 03, 2008

by Harold_P

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A haiku/senryu should attempt to provoke deep pensive thought. Job done, guv’nor.

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My sides ache from laughing. The last line is a great ironic twist.

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March 03, 2008

by Harold_P

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Ta muchly, onlywish.

March 10, 2008

by onlywish

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cheers

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^_ I like it!

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March 03, 2008

by Harold_P

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Um… great!

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This was very cute, and enjoyable to read. The way the last line is a very good line in relation to the piece. “No, just a space ship.” adds to the humor.

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March 03, 2008

by Harold_P

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Glad you enjoyed.

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