Too many voices
Haiku police shut them down
Everyone suffers
Stained reputation
Asterisk by the footnote
Dwell in infamy
Only Gunsaku
Loved unconditionally
Dawn the Meta-Muse
Heaven won’t have me
Arthritic Fist of Justice
Ignored all the rules
Join the evening sky
Immortal with human flaws
Night calls other stars
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Don’t go, Jaey…:) Very nice- the acrostic is superb. Talent, no matter what the personality. LOL _ have to say, each of your identities had their own distinct flavor. Sybil you were.
Clouded memories
Affect the balance of life
Numbing my desire
Young writers ego
Only serves in self defeat
Until they mature
Subject must be free
Enjoy all the worlds response
Every word grows
Wandering in sleep
Hovered over a crowd
Only to see you
Increase use of words
Always improves your thinking
Memory returns
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