Poetry / Winter

The pump froze again today, the
sudden cold snap halted water and
I hung on the useless arm
and cried. A hundred times you showed
me how to get water, but you knew
even then that I was never much
good at mechanical things.

I know that the pump will sit, alone
in the corner of the yard, lonely,
until spring comes to thaw the
water into life again. I know there
will be a hundred little reasons
I will long to have you back with me.

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April 29, 2008

Lin

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Lin reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Nice to read a poem that actually is meaningful! Don’t change anything.

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April 28, 2008

Ramblin_Jack

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Ramblin_Jack reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

nice well written piece, also very sorrowful which i liked

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