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LOC: Franklin, TN
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Original
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I worked myself into a funk after I listened to a fellow missionary, Sheryl, share about her prayer closet. Our ministry was gathered for our yearly worship service - to watch the Super Bowl. The women, of course, were sitting around the kitchen table talking. Sheryl is beautiful in form and spirit. As she described her early intimate years with Christ when He truly was her first love, we sat in wordless adoration. He had miraculously saved her and delivered her from a life of addictions. She...
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Poetry / Hope
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Hope is blue. Blue like the sky no crayon can match. Blue like the deepest part of the sea striking terror in anyone daring to glimpse it. Hope is fat. Like the pink toes of a 4 month old crowded on one foot. Fat like the steely arm of a grandmother holding you firm on her lap. Hope is tranquil. Like the face of a golden sunflower turned toward the sun. Like the mirrored surface of a pond on a cool spring morn. Hope is tender. Like hundreds of the greenest pine saplings dotting a hill. Like t...
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Blood chilling. The rage is barely concealed below the surface. And as I finished, I felt rage rise up in me. What happened? It is soul stirring. Just a suggestion, but I think leaving out the stuff about "worrying about being online" and "seeing my page" would pack a greater power. Try it. Maybe it will. Those things lend it to the current culture but the message transcends pop culture.
Lovely. This may be a silly question but is the first line 1st Draft/Swan? If not, remove it because it is confusing. I like the "clarion call" alliteration. This invites some musing and cannot be absorbed in minutes. Thank you. It is beautiful.
Poetry / Emotionless
I almost cannot resist psychoanalysis of the author versus a review of the poetry. And I think that tells me that the poem packs some power. It left me curious, pensive, reaching. Awesome.
Poetry / Adolescence
Love it. Just a thought: I wonder about ending with the first stanza. The line "My worst fear has come true:" seems like a closer. And the last first? Great line: "I wonder: do you cry out loud?" Piercing.
Haiku/Senryu / Dear Carl Perkins
Carl Perkins, God rest his soul, would be honored. Clever. Fluid. Kudos. Nice job.
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