I am sure that the story makes perfect sense to you. As a reader I didn't know what the hell was going on. I was completely lost.

Well, I got a boner. It was very sexual. I liked it. The lucky thing about being a woman is that you can walk up to any guy and say "Sex" and no guy will say no to that, unless they are gay. It doesn't matter if you are unattractive, fat, or ugly, most guys will fuck anything with a hole and a heart beat.

It was really good. I liked it a whole lot. It was a very honest piece. The stories focused remained on the relationship and not on the character. These characters could be anyone. This makes the reader relate to it.

You didn't really let the reader get to know the character. It was more or less a series of actions then thoughts. I know that the character was a woman, who for some reason laughed alot, but nothing more.

It was a really good idea for a story. Your main character was a real nut job. Almost to nutty, it almost wasn't believable. I liked it though. You drew the reader in within the first paragraph. I had to finish it just to see what happened at the end. You definetly did your job as a writer.

It was unique story, I liked the twist ending. How would the husband know what the wife did to the doctors kids though. If the wife had killed everyone, only she would know hoe they died or did I read it wrong. The problem with female killers is that it is really hard for them to overpower their male victims. I assume from the first sentence that she killed the doctor. Also, if she was a woman scorned would she really allow her husband to write a note. Would he be able to if he was drugged. I...

The story was a little all over the place. How the hell does a young kid go from doing the books for the mob to attending harvard. I grew up with guys in the mafia, they aren't the most trusting bunch. They don't actually have what you would call book keepers. In the beginning the character comes across as smart, almost evil and in the end I just thought he was a jackass.

You did a great gob building up suspense, if that was you intent. I would liket to see how this plays out. It was definetly a very interesting beginning. Are you planning on expanding on it?

I would definetly finish it. It was good. You could use this beginning for any number of stories. Could be a flashback from a soldier in Iraq. It has alot of potentail, just work out a scenario. You seem to know the character very well. You probably have a story already in mind for it.

I have a degree in psychology and the characters is not you stereotypical bulimic. That is not to say that a person like your character could not exist. Having worked with the mentally ill, you find all kinds of shapes and sizes. I liked it. The story definetly range true, I guess that was why so many people thought it was really about you. What attracted me to this story was the title Addicted. I am a recovering drug addict. What we say in recovery is, "I didn't have a drug problem, I had a ...