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AGE:
22
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 01
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 01
Well, to begin with, I would in no way consider myself an artist or poet. I fear my work isn’t as good as my friends claim, but then, friends are biased, perhaps that is why I am here.
Me though, I am 6’2 with jet black short hair, I have hazel eyes and apparently look older than 20, I heavily doubt this though.
My ambition is to be published, but I find it hard to believe that this shall be accomplished, and yes, I have little faith in myself grins I write now, merely to prove I still can.
Enjoy my work.
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Dante stepped back from the darkness of the trees and into the circle of light thrown off by the fire in the center of the camp. He looked to his friends, his only friends, sitting around the camp fire talking quietly, Keira was the first to speak out. "The night darkens visibly with your mood Dante, what thoughts trouble you?" she always had a compassionate tone to her voice, even when she herself was sad, it seemed as if others problems were always her own too. "Aye, the lady has a point, t...
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And that night I rested, in your silky soft embrace, And laid bare in your cuddle as you rested in my arms, Your eyes shone with beauty and I felt as if, Id been blessed by heaven itself, Your kisses, touches...all divine. I find myself here and can only smile, Touch me again, feel my heart as it beats, In tandem with yours, Kiss my lips as I smile again, And you take me in, We stroke and grasp and breathe and sigh, And at the end you still hold my heart, I couldn't let you go now, Forever en...
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You write well, the only reason I didn't like it is because so so many stories are about vampires these days. You could perhaps improve your flow slightly, how well we slide from one thing to the next? Other than this I would most definitley say you have the potential to be great. Well done.
Okay so I can't say I liked it? Because I just can't get into this genre...It's just not my thing, however that being said, you write quite damn well...Good flow, your words meld together, you create a beautiful scene. Also makes me sad...maybe thats why I didn't like it? *laughs* Keep writing! Matt
Okay, Im perhaps the wrong one to be reading this, but it came up on my list so here I am reviewing it...I didn't like it solely because I couldnt follow as adequatley as I think you might of wanted me to. Obviously this was not neccessarily designed for a 20 year old male audience with almost no interest in stage productions *chuckles* However that being said? You write with flair...and from what I could understand? You have a natural talent and my complete respect for being able to write so...
I didn't like it :-( sad stories really cut to my core. I freaking hate getting teary and this made me do it. So I congratulate you and hate you at the same time. Try and get this published, I'd like to know where it goes. 10.
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