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AGE: 48
LOC: Salem, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 12

I have been writing since I was very young. I used to sit for hours on a fallen tree that rested over a stream in the nearby woods…daydreaming. The daydreams flowed from mind, to pen, to paper…and became my peace of mind, my escape to a more beautiful world, and my art. I was acknowledged in highschool for my gift and won several awards. I wrote for the school newspaper, town newspaper, and was editor of the yearbook. I unfortunately had to forfeit a 4 year scholarship in which I would major in journalism. A family tragedy changed my path, my dreams and my future. But writing “is” about the love of the art…and I do love to write. I have continued to write throughout the years and received an award from the International Society of …

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Haiku/Senryu / Unseen
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Such flawless beauty Found in the simplest of things Unseen too often
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Haiku/Senryu / Regrets (Revised)
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fear of rejection opportunities dissolve regrets haunt our dreams
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Poetry / Forbidden Dreams
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What stirrings would occur within my soul if I were to gaze into the depths of your eyes? What wondrous sensations would the caress of your fingertips upon my face inspire? What comfort would I relish if I were wrapped within the gentleness of your arms? What rapture would I feel race through me to be lost in the sweetness of your warm soft kiss? What happiness would I experience if your breathless whispers brushed lightly against my skin? What emptiness would disappear if I could share in th...
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Many years have passed, with dreams lying idle within my thoughts and heart. But now you're here, my long awaited Prince, awakening senses from their sweet slumber. I imagine your form before me, and I feel your heart slowly but surely joining with mine. The magnetism is phenomenal, and the common bond is a dream in the making. I absorb the words that come from your heart and soul, and my heart flutters at the mirror image before me. I am thrilled by the similarities, and yet saddened by the...
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I Can Only Imagine As l listen to water spilling over stones in a bubbling stream, I can only imagine the sound of your voice whispering softly in my ear. As I gaze upon the stars twinkling brilliantly throughout the midnight sky, I can only imagine the passion held within the dark depths of your eyes. As the soft warm breeze gently caresses my skin, I can only imagine your fingertips tenderly tracing the curve of my face. As I lie down and the comforting earth softly presses into my body, I ...
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I really like this. The comparisons are interesting and wonderful. Very creative and imaginative. I love this thought... "This is how I see darkness, being without God— mental winds in the world swirling outwardly, moving to imbalance what is heard and seen." I feel the words and thoughts have a nice and easy flow and lead the reader into a mental picture that is easy to grasp. You are taken away for a moment with the distraction, but I believe it "adds" to the charm of the write...and blende...
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A very insightful and comforting Haiku. Depending upon what one believes in, this can strike a very deep chord within many. I feel that you must have faith..for without faith how can one possibly hope for anything...without hope I feel the inner most part of us would cease to exist. You stated a great deal within so few words. Wonderful.
Poetry / Here On Earth
This is a nice write. You have a couple of misspellings, "creator" and "possess". Your words flow very well and the message is very clear until "washing in the purity of our forgotten tears, bleeding years as we become striped from the lies which we dress". I think you possibly meant to write "stripped"? If that is the case, might I suggest..."as we are stripped of the lies in which we dress"...only a slight variance in verbage. Possibly..."Savor the sweet passion as its nectar flows... "allo...
Poetry / Wet
This is an interesting write. It doesn't contain detailed descriptives, but it still places very clear images within the mind. The music of love that is present even in the worst of storms. You do not always need a lot of words to paint the picture if they are well written. This is nicely done. Good job.
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This is a very nice splash of teenage feelings. I remember feeling these emotions when I was a teenager. "Take your hands off my heart" "Stop trying to pull my mind apart" "Wipe the blood from my blade" "I'll paint a smile on" "Can't you just leave me alone?" "My naked body thrown against the world" "They sing I don't belong" All these phrases display the confusion, and often times pain, that creates turmoil in the mind of the youth. It describes the emotions during the transformation from yo...
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