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maken's profile
AGE:
20
LOC: Gracemont, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 12
LOC: Gracemont, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 12
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i’m not a fancy writer, i only write papers for grades, or small random things like journal entries and junk. so yeah, you don’t have to tell me that i use run-on sentences and shit. rest assured i don’t write like that in essays. um i don’t like capitalization… it’s not my desperate cry to be an individual, i’m just lazy…
why you won’t read anything not a journal entry: i just finished a drawing class, and that was my first experience as an “artist.” it was meh, as in mediocre. i liked the stuff i made, and i definitely improved, but i am not too crazy about having someone grade based on the quality of my work instead of effort. so the same idea kind of applies to urbis crap. i am not afraid of people not liking …
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You referred to committing suicide to “accomplishing that task,” I’m not sure of your opinion on suicide, but it may not be what you are telling me it is in this sentence… I love this “I’d say they could go first and tell me all about it.” That is so true, I would say that. This is a nice little comic relief in this story, or maybe it’s just me. The part where you talk about chemo is really powerful. It is really easy to imagine this scene and be emotionally affected by it. I do agree with so...
At first your title confused me... yes, I do not understand the people who complain about people being mean to them about spelling words wrong. I understand spelling is hard, I also understand that this is a sight for writers and that there has to be a line drawn somewhere.
This is definately true on both levels. Can I have permission to tell my kids this when I am older?
Well I don’t exactly buy the king queen bit, because the animalistic the point the speaker has reached. He doesn’t care if he is having sex with his lady, he cares that he is having sex. Keep taking every thrust you receive- does she really have any other choice? I had a hard time deciding whether to yell AY PAPI! Or punch the speaker in the face for being so damn egotistical. “inch after inch Of myself,” oh please, even if I was having sex I would laugh if my boyfriend said that. Ok I decide...
Haikus are amazing. You managed to portray sexual images, while showing respect and admiration. The repetition of “ing” endings is a powerful way to tie the poem together.
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