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LOC: Fort Lauderdale, FL
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There it goes again the same thing keeps on happening. It always seems to be something new that upsets me. I am not trying to pick a fight but its something new each night. Let it go let it go its not so.. let it go let it go its not so... you may think that its easy but for me it can't be. I see his words all loud and clear you add yours so austere. I am pulled by both directions disregarding my affections. Let it go Let it go its not so... Let it go let it go its not so... And i...
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You try and play mozart A key or two is not quite art But you have deciphered the part That makes you follow her heart. Let go of it. Little Mozart Let go of it. Little Mozart. Little curls are only nasty thoughts. Innocent and full of it all. But you know there is a cost just follow a little place called love. Let go of it Little Mozart Let go of it Little Mozart Let it go find yourself deep inside of you
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Here we go with the tragic scene and i can't let go of anything i just want to hold onto you you were the only one true. But you dont know who I am and you werent part of the plan You decieved me and i will still be around long enough to bleed but this i know is not for me and you I still need, help, please But you dont know who I am and you werent part of the plan.
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Touching old fires yearning for re-lighting Emotions keep melting from the heat between the space of you and me. Should this be too much? Should I stay so unsteady? Should I crave such a touch? Should I allow you to affect me? From the very first spark you possesed my heart The invisible passion so deep i felt the tornado sweep Through the blueprints of me. Un-invent me. Un-Invent me. Your face is the most smoothest Your eyes are the most deepest Your lips are the m...
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I am under what you have begun the danger that you cant hide from you put me through sush pain the only thing I can't explain to try is insane. Tell me there is more before i give up, just this once Tell me there is more to come coming to save me from the worst of us. Talk me under your influence offer me the best of situations.
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I absolutely loved the poem and the meaning of the word Turritellid. There are a lot of explanations and thoughts and feelings.
I enjoyed the darkness of your poem. Though I think it could use a little more to it. Something, an explanation, a deeper sense as to why you feel this way to feel connected to the poem. \
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At first I must admit I was quite interested in reading this one due to the title. The title was a great way to get someone to actually read it. The layout of the poem was good. The ending was perfect in the way that it is the truth but an escape. I enjoyed the read. I enjoyed what it meant to me.
WOW! The pain and the sanity behind the emotions put me there. First of all to start of with, I enjoyed the read in all. Love is a bubble and you showed how much energy and oxygen can take it all up. I believe that you spoke the truth, and with it you made the best of of everything. Though the third stanza needs a little work.It seems a little off. The flow went away at that point. That is just me. I am unperfect as therefore many others. Great, and to the point.
"some refer to him as demented a title he truly resented" had me there in this poem. Made me see the moment in life I have met a character such as the one you have potrayed. The idea of saying "does he not bleed too" and the connection to bleeding red too, goes to show that sometimes emotions are both the same. I enjoyed reading this because there are those moments that poets continue on with the story and it makes me keep on wondering. But you had it all down with the way that you felt and t...
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