lookingbeyond's profile
AGE:
55
LOC: Scottsville, KY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 04
LOC: Scottsville, KY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 04
sometimes i can be very clownish,,
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Look at us,,,,,, what are we now ? What is it you see? Time has made a difference changing you and me We could blame it on society or the country going broke but it’s the motions we going through they’re running out of hope .. So let’s close the door on days gone by grab our different keys stop going through the motions making useless memories ... Friends and neighbors watch us they read us like a book these motions we’re going through aren’t worth a se...
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so many years of traveling so many bar room brawls so many women of the night it’s a burden to recall scars and tattoos prove it some good times and some bad the tubes and all the oxygen oh he’s no longer iron clad .. But now they call him burnout some have called him worse but looks is not deceiving he’s a living wretched curse his parade has finally stopped truth is face to face but he has no clue where he has been he only stares in space ... Should I write a...
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somewhere lost in poetry his words so hard to find a keyboard resting quietly where the fingers are so blind stranded deep in loneliness reaching for the sky he’s lost somewhere in poetry where no one should ever die soul searching for an answer running from a word poisoned with its power wish he had never heard but good bye keeps on ringing like thunder with the rain goodbye can be sudden and can harvest so much pain .. somewhere deep in poetry there’s a door of days g...
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What’s happened to our country where the lawyers grow so rich and another broken dream cast in a god forsaken ditch another parent busted another case is solved another desk stands empty when love is not involved And from a chalkboard in Toledo , another name has been erased and the brotherhood of broken dreams has lost another face While two classmates on the playground tell lies to hide the truth related by their broken dreams both brothers by abuse ...
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Up and over, over and out, I won't give in without a doupt. This is very clever . I like the way you ryhme . It's always acceptable in this world . keep it up .. Have you put music to this? I would like to hear this . there will always be people judging people , so you picked a good topic, now just build on this one . keep the theme , and write about eight more than compile a cd. lookingbeyond .
Sometimes when people try to use the same ryhme sound it back fires but I most admit this was clever with the "ink" Kudos
I like this , but not to sure about some words ,, fewer ,,, and saheeb please keep writing lookingbeyond
sounds like something from old england ,, back from yesteryear keep going with it ..
It would be a nice one to submit to fleetwood mac .. i like this a lot I like your ryhme here .. I'm gonna break free I'm gonna succeed I'm gonna find whatever it is I need You have very strong potential .
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