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AGE: 16
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 27

it seems that i love to write. just like any true writter would say “writting is my passion”, but i guess its not really in me. i think that im not a great writter sometimes because im not being noticed or praised. i crave for anything that would help me be a better writter. so far writting is the solution for some problems you cant fix.

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Spread the love. Don't just do it but break peices off. Share it upon others that dont have enough. And smile each time your heart tickles. Make a upside down frown as much as possible. Silly faces are lonely with out happiness, So pass out as many smiley faces where ever the sun reaches. And poke your giggles randomly. Laugh as if your talking to someone far away. Throw snickers at the floor when your sad. Think of the funny moments that brought tears of joy. And whisper a compliment behind ...
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Poetry / Light & dark
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Light and Dark feel in love. But the two couldn't be together. Forever seperated. So Light died. In return Dark faded away. The two were reincarnated into this world. Now both are found everywhere Intertwined peacefully.
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Poetry / As they wait...
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Theres this little girl. She waits everyday by the grassy cliff side. Always looking towards the sea. Yet eventually she stares blankly up above. In her mind she thinks. Not all the time, but sometimes. Standing their waiting. Eventually till the sun sets. She never leaves. And the weather is always the same. The dark doesnt scare the girl. Because she believes the stars are watching her. She lays on her back and humms to the world. Counting all the bright specks that dot the charcoal sky. Ev...
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Sometimes i wish i could make air. Sometimes that air i could make would help others breath. That air would give life. That air would save lives. Everyone is dying underwater. Everyone is sucking in emptiness. That water is slowly making them struggle. That water is seeping in through their lungs. Sometimes i wish i could create heat. Sometimes the heat i made would warm hearts. That heat would send a pulse through the cold. That heat would wake up people's souls. Everyone is feezing under th...
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Poetry / still waiting...
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my wishing star didnt grant me my desire yet. ive been wishing for a couple times now. i wasnt to big on wishes coming true but i couldnt help hoping. i was proven wrong yet again. the shining star that was so close to heaven didnt hear my whisper of wishes. my prince charming from my dreams hasnt been made into reality yet. ive been waiting for days on end to fall back to sleep. i thought that dreaming was more simpliar that wishing. i was proven wrong once more. the dreams never came back w...
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Poetry / Fly away
I truely understand this poem. I find that i think about this all the time. In the most strangest moments i think about the things we cant obtain. I believe that god made us this way. To always strive for the things we can not reach. That is why we slowly crave for the things that are unobtainable. Hmm...you know the thing is that i always think about the birds and the sky. They can do everything we can do in their life style but i guess the only thing different is that they cant write. How s...
this poem is very well written. It flows perfectly into the meaning you put for it. I wrote something very similar, yet its a little bit longer. I like the parts were you first start of at a disadvantage, but you have a come back in return. Always staying optomistic and showing that you can find a loop hole around everything.
Poetry / One Year Ago
This piece of writing was very easy for me to understand. It totally understood a lot of what you were coming from. Its hard to imagine loosing a family memeber because for me I'd be devisated. I love my family to death. To be honest its them that inspire me to write the good, the bad, and the random things in between. It sad to hear you lost someone close to you, but dont move on. Insted of moving on off it take the wings your giving him and share them. As you do both of you will be together...
it is true when people say that love is friendship on fire. In this poem it truely expresses that saying. I understand that when you touch the person you love you can really feel that sensation that flows within you. Its as if touching metal or somebody and in return you get a small static shock. This poem shows a lot of that but insted of a shock you get a fire. And your not only feeling this flame your melting into it and infusing your body with this flame. Almost devoring as much as you ca...
Poetry / Inspired
i understand where your coming from. I use to consider cutting myself but i realized that its not really useful. Ha, what a stupid stage in life. But in that small moment all you ever consider is the pain. The emotions that your going through is to much to handle. So i guess cutting yourself blocks everything out. You focus on just the current slashes in your arms rather than the ones your feeling in your heart. I guess thats why somepeople like to cut themselves...
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