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AGE:
31
LOC: Ontario, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 06
LOC: Ontario, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 06
Poetry & Literature are my passions…
I got offered a very cool book deal, but alas my confidence in my writing is just not where it should be right now. That’s where you come in I need to know where I am “lagging” TRUST me..I will appreciate all the feedback… Gracias _
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Roaches creeping up my leg.. perhaps I better move now. Its been a while since I've been sitting here.. The mold considers me another piece of furniture. Lice have created gated communities on my head.. in my armpits and other hair filled areas.. I no longer feel the itchiness all over my body.. The walking of spiders all over me...I now invite. The fleas that jump from body crevice to body crevice... entertain me. The rats that come often to nibble on my ears are nice to listen to. I can't r...
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You are the best thing from my past.. He said. It's you...solely you, with whom I want to spend the rest of my life.. He said. You are my youth..The air that I breath.. You have the skin that I want to touch, lick and scratch.. You make the moans and groans that I yearn and work for.. You have that long hair.. That long hair that falls on your bare back and sticks to you from our sweat..and it drives me crazy.. You have that breath.. That hard breath, that when I feel it on my ear, my chest a...
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You mean it's not real? You were never here? You never touched me and gave me goosebumps? You never made me giggle and blush with those kinky little comments? You never meant to call or tell me that you cared for me? You never asked me to come over? You never lifted my skirt up with a savage desire to be fed? Never? Never? It never really happened? Sorry I must have a wrong number then... Thank You, Have a nice day.
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Screaming so silently right about now...tired and lifeless after it all...My head pounding..pounding..My eyes burning..burning...No where to turn..no one to turn to...Everyone's gone...Everyone's flying around with their guardian angel, and me? Sitting here in the mouth of darkness... Hands looking old, ashy and yes even wrinkled from the cold...the cold..oh! its so cold...cover me...cover me...make me and keep me warm...make me and keep me safe from harm...chase all the sexual feelings away....
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The heat of your breath on my back The tightness of your stomach on my ass The roughness of your hands on my hips The stiffness of your.....inside of me The softness of your lips on my inner thighs The strength of your sucking on my ........ The length of my moans when I'm with you The release that we both give after hours of play The sweet sweat that makes our bodies stick & The taste of your pleasure in my mouth
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sounds finished. sounds done. sounds complete. sounds exactly like what it says... that you found your purpose.. its good..its short and definite.. powerful and done. GREAT!
Good. For a while, there I was like..."yes! yes! yes!" I totally knew what you were/are talking about... I was there..I know, I know!! but then.... "she doesn't even know him."....huh? what? YOU TOTALLY LOST ME! I was there...you had me! but then...you lost me! what happened? huh? I just got very confused when you brought in the "other girl?" You had me though.. it was good... Keep working on it though...you can tweek it better :o)
OUCH! EXTREMELY POWERFUL!!! I can't tell you how much I empathize..because well...its way WAY too many times...that I have felt exactly the way this piece says..better off gone. But alas..."God is Great & God is Good" and he knows what he is doing.. everything happens for a reason..and he never sends us more than we can chew I always say... after I've gone through and deal with whatever it was that made me feel about me this way...I know deep DEEP inside..that I am a STRONGER WOMAN/person bec...
I LOVED IT! very energetic... very urban "SOUNDING" it was just good! I love your made up words and use of them... Its different..its new...its HELLA COOL! I enjoyed it very much.. Thank You for sharing.. You just made a new fan :o)
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