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LOC: Willamina, OR
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Do you want to hear my song Do you want to listen to my story Do you want to see the movie in my head Do you want to get to know me There might not be much there That you will want to hear But maybe if you listen to me I can take away some fear Maybe I can help you Help you grow or ease your doubt If you'll just give me a chance And for once just hear me out I'm not amazing, I do not know all I don't have all the answers that you may want to hear But maybe I can catch you when you fall So all...
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Hi. I am a seventeen year old , though not a stereotypical teenager. I live in a community where class, appearance, money, and status matter, but I try not to conform. I love to laugh and smile and see the bright side of the world. I've learned to appreciate the small things in life and to not take for granted the sun, the stars, and the rain. I live my life for God, for He have His only son for me. It's not possible for me to count the blessings that I have in my life. I have amazing friends...
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One tear falling down my face One reminder of the struggles I face One symbol of the hurt I feel One sign of the weakness I can't reveal One thought, one feeling One moment in time, One realization, one regret, One tear at a time. This tear is for you, the one I love A tear to show you me The real me, the true me The me that you love And as it falls I begin to pray That this tear will chase all my struggles away So as it leaves my troubled face I see all of the worries that can be erased. For...
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I do like this poem that you have written, and I thank you for sharing. Even though I don't know what you are specifically referring to when writing this, I can see the sincerity and emotion that comes with it. I like the last stanza especially. It holds a great deal of feeling, and I think a lot of people will be able to relate to your poem. Happy writing.
The imagery used is wonderful. You have a way with words that leads the reader right into your thoughts and mind, as well as your heart. The topic of your poem is one that many can relate to, as many have been through this. I think that is very good. It is also something that few people are able to put words to, and therefore something that will be of more interest to people. Overall, I think you did a wonderful job of approaching a subject that few discuss, as well as positively approaching ...
I really like your poem. I love the childhood reflection that comes with it, and even though not everyone's childhood is similar to the one you have described, it still leads readers to reflect and look back. I think it's relatable, which is always a good thing in a piece of writing. I do, however, feel that the ending is kind of sad and less optimistic and might ruin the mood of the poem. I don't think that growing up necessarily has to take all of those things away. It's cliche, but we all ...
hehe this has made me smile. I find it amusing, and agree on some things. Writing is definitely a good outlet to let all of that out. Maybe I should consider it as well. Only thing...I like country music, and to some people...it is.
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