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AGE: 34
LOC: San Antonio, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 31
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Short Story / Oral Surgery
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I remember when I went to get my wisdom teeth taken out, back in 2003. It was somewhere over there in the Medical Center. I filled out a few forms in the reception and a hygienist dressed in those loose-fitting floral surgical scrubs came through to lead me to the dentist's room. She led me out of the shiny reception with its gleaming tables and plastic pot plants, across a dull corridor carpeted with a reassuring bounce, and guided me to a door. On the other side of that door I sat alone, in...
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Short Story / Words, words, words
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It was a winter night in Glasgow, some time in the mid-Nineties, and my friend Tim and I stopped off at the Irish pub for a couple of pints. I liked the Irish pub. In spite of the fact that it was shockingly artificial, there was still much to like about it. It was always busy, and as soon as you opened the door you were greeted with a gust of warm air and the din of people—people everywhere—laughing and shouting. They poured good Guinness. I liked the way my boots sounded, thudding around on...
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Quotes / Politicians
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Nobody trusts a politician, but people trust their governments.
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Quotes / Freedom
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Freedom is never having to lie. Though all governments will lie to their people, it is when the people have to lie to their governments that they know they are no longer free.
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Quotes / pills
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Regardless of what pharmaceutical companies might have you think, there is no pill to cure the fact that the world has problems.
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Limericks / Bird
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Wow. That last sentence packed one hell of a punch. That's a great way to end a story. I really didn't see it coming. Totally amazing. A few observations: I love the way you started with the image of Charity boarding the train with her oar. It really drew me in. "relation to where she was for, even in Portland, a young teenage girl..." I think this would read better as "relation to where she was, for even in Portland," etc. Liked the fish references with the goth kids being "fish-belly white"...
Non-fiction / sad boy's love song
There is some very honest and deep reflection here, and I particularly liked "you couldn't help but inherit the sorrow of so many lonely lives and broken hearts." Being a man of roughly the same age as yourself, I can definitely relate very closely to a lot of the themes here: of not having the same excuses we had when we were younger, and in spite of being more experienced, not really finding any more sense in it all. There's a kind of almost schizo split personality quality in the way you s...
Short Story / Espionage
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Novel Treatments / Elusive Nature of the truth
I can't wait to find out what happened next. This piece kept me fully engrossed because of certain elements that ensure a fulfilling read. Right from the start, the idea of having just published a book and having to answer to people wanting to slam it, it provokes an emotional response. Someone being put in a position where they are forced to defend something they've created, something that is theirs and could belong to no-one else, well this is a theme that instantly drew me in. The fact tha...
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