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Poetry / Truths
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Truths A million words are spoken, Which ones are the truth, The ones that are forgotten, Or become a part of you.   Some hurt you deeply, And others only scathe the surface, Others leave you thinking, Pondering your worth, Am I worth the trouble, Was this what god was offering, When he created me.   Did he want for me to be a fighter, And rise from beneath, I am submerged with the pain of my demons, They have taken over, Holding me under, I can't breathe, I feel like...
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My words are buried deep within, Masked by daily tasks that nerve end, Bottling up emotions, Afraid of being let down, Not letting others in, I want to scream, I am so mad, Why did you do this? I was walking on clouds, Now I have fallen so far down, Struggling to get up, I am forced to be strong, I want to cry, I hate you for this, but I can't, My mind won't let me, I was taught to forgive, You did the unforgiveable, How do I come back? This is lost, What we had is gone, Y...
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My words are burried deep within, Masked by daily tasks that nerve end, Bottling up emotions, Afraid of being let down, Not letting others in, I want to scream, I am so mad, Why did you do this? I was walking on clouds, Now I have fallen so far down, Struggling to get up, I am forced to be strong, I want to cry, I hate you for this, but I can't, My mind won't let me, I was taught to forgive, You did the unforgiveable, How do I come back? This is lost, What we had is gone, ...
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Poetry / Missing Him
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Broken down, Missing you, Wanting your arms to open, For me and enclose me too.   Please come home to me, I am a place for you to call your own, I will be here until our days are done.   Grow old with me, See our future in eachothers eyes, Stay with me we have the rest of our lives.   My heart is open to all this change, I am done fighting, Lacking the rage.   Please come back here, I am waiting for you, I am on the sidelines wanting to, Be in this game of life, Not alone,...
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Poetry / Last Letter
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Have you seen her heart? It is tarnished by your words, the edges blacked with sorrow, from this hurt so undeserved. She cries herself to sleep each night, because she is so alone, the man who sleeps beside her, is vacant to the world. Don't you remember? when you fell in love, the beauty shined right through her, lighting your way in life, making it hard to walk away, from the woman who is now your wife. Now the light has dimmed, for what she possessed has gone astray, she has vanished under...
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Yes desire is all consuming... I like where you went with this, the overall flow is a little choppy but all in all I liked it... keep it up.
Poetry / He Is
This was descriptive, I liked it very much, he seems to truly be everything. But who is he? maybe add a little more to that thought.
I really like this, the way you flowed science into words. I am normally drawn to poems of relationships and romance but this made me think which is nice for a change. Keep it up I thoroughly enjoyed it. Also people forget that its your thoughts and critique the poem to death. Well now I have something to check out on youtube.
This is contemporary romance, I liked it very much and am interested in seeing the rest when you have finished. It flowed well and the dialogue mixed well with the inner feelings that the characters were experiencing. I am anxious to see what happens between Dallas and Dessa. They are starting a new adventure together as adults, sounds steamy and exciting. Keep up to the good work.
This was a dark piece, leaving detailed description, I personally liked your use of metaphors. I also saw no spelling or punctuation errors.. Keep it up.
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