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In the dictionary unrequited love is defined as “love that is not openly reciprocated, even though reciprocation is usually deeply desired”. True. But what the dictionary doesn’t mention is the complete utter pain one goes through when going through unrequited love. It doesn’t mention how it is possibly the most brutal emotion around, the emotion that can drive the victims insane and almost kills them. For those who have not ever felt feelings of unrequited love they c...
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They say “their are plenty of fish in the sea” what they don’t realise is you will only settle for the one fish who wont take the bait.
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Desperation is when everything you do starts to seem completely hopeless; when your whole world becomes a nightmare and you’d do anything to make it right again. People’s true colours come out when they are desperate but not everyone’s true colours aught to be seen. It’s the moments when you see no way out of your nightmare that can turn your world around. It’s these moments when the biggest mistakes are made; psychopaths don’t think before they act, alcoho...
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I don't know who she is or what she likes doing. I don't know how hard her life is, or what pain she's been through. I don't know her name and i don't know her face, all I know is i would give anything to be the lucky girl who gets to spend the rest of their life with you.
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Here comes my heart, my soul, my everything. Dressed in my favourite green shirt he walked slowly towards me. I was use to it, it was routine but still I couldn’t fade the smile spread so rapidly on my face. “Hey” I said casually wrapping my arms tightly around his waist. He gave me a smile, but it was different, fake, I knew right away something was up. “What’s wrong?” I asked concerned “You know me all too well” he replied anxiously “Has something happened?” “No” “Did you forget something?”...
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This is a great way to explain our good side and our bad side. I really liked the imagery you used to discribe the butterfly and the dragon especially when you used words like ' She floats with great ease For there is nothing that she lacks'. You did a really good job where you trying to say that even the most perfect of people have a dark side? It was really enjoyable to read and i think the theme of this story came out well good job:)
I like this poem as it is a good idea about escaping reality and disappearing into a dream world. I loved the imagery you used in the poem such as 'I search for seas and sail thru them in pleasant breeze'. It shows well the unbelieved world you can escape to which i think you brought out really well. good job :)
Beautiful! This poem uses great imagary to describe love and i love it! i especially love how you compare love to a sun set that changes everyday but still each one is very rememberable. This poem actually brought tears to my eyes. good job!
I think you captured the feeling of substained tension well. Its very good for under 18 and has good descriptive words. Good job!
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