Reviews
Quotes / Full Circle
I really like this. I like the truthfulness in this quote. It's something what a little sentence can do. Great job!
Quotes / Life #2
This quote is different and I think I like that. It's true, and for some very hard to take. Right to the point. Great job!
Action Adventure / The Outsider - Chapter 1
I liked this story. Now I'm left wondering who The Outsider is and where he got his gift from. At times, I felt bored with this story, but yet, I still enjoyed it. I think you should continue on and yes, your story could even make for a good comic book. Great job!
I like this piece. I think that people can relate to this. If only our dreams could become a reality. Great job!
I like this quote. There is much truth in this. I wasn't quite sure about the title at first, but I can see where it works. Great job!
Quotes / Beginnings
I like this. I'm not sure about the semi-colon, though. Other than that, great job!
Poetry / frugal bastard
I like this. The first stanza is really good and it poses a good question. This is a funny little piece, but it flows good and it makes sense. The parts within the quotations didn't do much for me, but I'm sure for someone else they would be fine. Good job, though!
Haiku/Senryu / cheap with the creds
The only reason why I'm leaving a review is because I think this is cute. I did read "frugal bastard" and I shall comment on it next. This is very much to the point and yes cheap on the credits.
Quotes / I Alone
I gave this a 10 because it's the truth. It doesn't get any simpler, or put more clearly than this!
Poetry / Beach
I liked the visuals in this piece. The ending was wonderful. The only thing I would mention is your spelling of beautiful is wrong..there's only one l. Other than that, great job!

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