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AGE: 24
LOC: Emporium, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 05

My name is Tiffany. I’ve been writing for 16 years now. I have two books out. Hazel Eyes Smile and Sarah’s Journey. If you want to know anything about them, please contact me and I will tell you more. I’m not only a writer, but a music fanatic as well. I love the 80’s. Music and writing are life to me..and there is nothing else!

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He walked out before midnight and made sure he was alone/the whole week had sucked/he felt on his own/they wrote the beginning/he'd write the end/after all this shit/he could no longer pretend/ I need out (3x) Don't (hold me back)(2x) I need to breakdown/he needed something/but always got nothing/this lack of trust and all of this hate/need to be going now/he must escape/so he ran down to the tracks/it was almost time/need to go fast and kiss this world good-bye/ Chorus- Take a walk/take a wa...
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Lyrics / Cover Darkness
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Saw you in a dream heard you call my name only me only me and only you in darkness in silence cover up all your truths make love to me and lies don't deny the night it's callin you Chorus- Cover darkness with your love like a shield, it's just enough in the morning sun will rise but till then open wide and take the night take the night and make it right cover darkness cover me Back against the wall no guard on no worries in sight lean in a little closer breathe on me let me see you feel the w...
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Four stop lights and five hours ago; Jonathan Conway was on the way to: another site, another case, and once again LATE! “Dammit, Jonathan! Where are you?” Steven Mercury started to pack up his things to leave. “Jonathan never was one for being on time.” James Sterling offered. “I don’t care. This was supposed to be our first assignment together. Where is he?” “About that Steven…” At that moment, Jonathan raced through the door: excited, embarrassed, and apologetic. “You’re late again girl,”...
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Novel Treatments / Undercover Lovers (chapter 1)
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Four stop lights and five hours ago; Jonathan Conway was on the way to: another site, another case, and once again LATE! “Dammit, Jonathan! Where are you?” Steven Mercury started to pack up his things to leave. “Jonathan never was one for being on time.” James Sterling offered. “I don’t care. This was supposed to be our first assignment together. Where is he?” “About that Steven…” At that moment, Jonathan raced through the door: excited, embarrassed, and apologetic. “You’re late again girl,”...
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I slit my wrists when I think about you and I'm almost to the bone it hurts so bad when I try to call you but you won't pick up the phone if I hung myself would you notice me then? or does it take more to thrill you hurt myself just for fun so you’d fall into my arms again all this blood flowing out of my veins red like the heart that beats slower through the day Chorus- As I drain myself dry to get you out of me and move on with my life even if it means that I don't breathe again if it's wit...
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Poetry / Beyond the Door
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Poetry / Beach
I liked the visuals in this piece. The ending was wonderful. The only thing I would mention is your spelling of beautiful is wrong..there's only one l. Other than that, great job!
Quotes / I Alone
I gave this a 10 because it's the truth. It doesn't get any simpler, or put more clearly than this!
Haiku/Senryu / cheap with the creds
The only reason why I'm leaving a review is because I think this is cute. I did read "frugal bastard" and I shall comment on it next. This is very much to the point and yes cheap on the credits.
Poetry / frugal bastard
I like this. The first stanza is really good and it poses a good question. This is a funny little piece, but it flows good and it makes sense. The parts within the quotations didn't do much for me, but I'm sure for someone else they would be fine. Good job, though!
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