ladymuniz's profile
AGE:
28
LOC: Miami, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 18
LOC: Miami, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 18
I write to filter myself… sometimes to suppress, explore, release the rage, sadness, sinful thoughts of my “borderline” mind. I’ve not shared much of my writing as its as raw as possible and it makes me feel vulnerable when I do. I’m excited to be read as a writer and as a person; looking forward to feed back. yes, as you will notice my writing is FAR from perfect and most of it is filled with errors or half thought phrases.. thats because when i write, im usually in a fit of happiness or slump of misery and I write to keep sane. Your comments will help me in my attempts to become a better “venter” through writing. Many of my writing may never be seen or dare i say.. published; but thats ok, because if I was able to relate to someone t…
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Curtains Open: The Mind’s Monologue Begins!
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In the aroma of a newly budding flower or in sight of a twilight evening come… there is no delight. Yet you, standing in the days’ end masterpiece of simmering colors with closed eyes, head tilted backwards, I inhale. your scent, this vision….stirs that which breath sustains To search for a feeling such as this is without reason. It is by you that these pleasure seeking senses are satisfied ....
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In the aroma of a newly budding flower or in sight of a twilight evening come… there is no delight. Yet you, standing in the days’ end masterpiece of simmering colors with closed eyes, head tilted backwards, I inhale. your scent, this vision….stirs that which breath sustains To search for a feeling such as this is without reason. It is by you that these pleasure seeking senses are satisfied ....
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Your rays caress my shimmering white skin Inklings of desire spring "Erase all the cold frigid death that I bring" Create in me life that I may pass on Liquefy me. Purity, yes, cleansing purity Make love to me, Summer Your heat, your passion, they create spring showers Somber hallow caves awaken Movement conjoined with tender warm breaths A breeze of relief now drowns out my wicked winters bitter woes You’ve stirred the waters; they run along side the jagged rocks Corroded sediments that hav...
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Open Curtains: The Minds Monologue begins!
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My daughters would love this. I think with a good illustrator this could be a great childrens book. I have four daughters... believe me, they'd love this.
I like this piece. Relating thoughts to flies is pretty accurate. When you think of the ability of a writer to grasp a thought much like someone grasping a fly it all makes sense. It does meet word requirement.
sounds odd.. think it should be just need not needs,unless "Malapropist" is a person and not the actual word "malapropist" meaning someone who usually unintentionally misuses or distorts of a word or phrase... Think its good.
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