completly amazing! I Loved it!!!!

Wow, wow, wow!!! That was awsome! It's like you painted a picture with words. I felt like I was standing right next to that sniper, I felt like I WAS the sniper! Completley (spelling?) amazing! I would love to read more of your work!

Very realistic...you can feel your character's embarassment (spelling?) and pain...This is a very good piece...

Wow, it seems to be very well thought out...It also sounds very suspenceful, and I think I would enjoy reading the full novel...Great job!

What kind of negotiations are going on, I wonder? Very interesting piece...

Pretty...Very interesting...I like it...Even though I'm not all that great at understanding poetry sometimes...This is really good...

AWWWWW!!!!It sounds like something some one would say about their loved one! So sweet! I liked "With hair like flowing satin and hands like delicate lace". I loved this!!!