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I like the whole concept of it but there are some things I would have liked to know. For example when she tells him he has to save the universe you would think he'd go off his head, mental start freaking out (at least that's what I would do). Also you say said a lot after most of your direct speech. And sometimes it gets a bit hard to follow. But the plot seems good I'm interested in finding out what happens. I like how he thinks he's going insane when he sees Layla, (most normal human beings...

I love the way it ends. It makes me want to turn the page and keep reading. It captures the perfectly how girls feel about break ups. And I like how it also captures family matters I want to read the rest.

I liked the overall feel of it. It moved well and I read through it easily. However my one point of criticism: some of the rhymes seemed a little pushed and even some of the lines because of this. But overall I liked it.

It sounds like an interesting book and I would love to read it. But somehow it seems strangely familiar. I will definitely read it when it is available an I would love to be proven wrong.