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LOC: Chesterfield, VA
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LAST LOGIN: November 01
LOC: Chesterfield, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 01
Southern gal. College English professor. Avid music lover.
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Chapter 2 Twenty minutes away from the accident, in a sprawling subdivision, Lieutenant Matthew Dix sat in his unmarked police cruiser, his feet dangling out the driver’s side door, one hand clutching a clipboard, the other gripping his radio receiver. His laptop was plugged into the police dispatch program, and he watched the words scrawl across the screen, as the dispatcher’s dispassionate voice echoed the words. “Multiple vehicle accident on 285 at exit 4B. All available...
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Mercy “But it was for mercy,” I wanted to scream. My wrists ached from the handcuffs which bit into my skin. My head spun with the cadence of blue which cast a blipping light into my retina as I stared out the window of the police car. Didn’t even Jesus himself say, “Blessed are the merciful, for they shall be given mercy?” I had learned my lesson with the squirrel. Didn’t they know that I had made my mistake before? I could not do it again. It had been...
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Chapter 1 It was only by mistake that we found the house in the first place. It was in an auction advertisement buried in the middle of The Staunton Gazette. We had stopped off for lunch at a roadside barbeque restaurant in the little town of Staunton, Georgia. The paper had been left on our table; I casually flipped it open, and there it was. The house from my nightmares. I had been having dreams lately, starting before Jason and I left on our trip to visit his brother. In the dream, I was...
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Mercy “But it was for mercy,” I wanted to scream. My wrists ached from the handcuffs which bit into my skin. My head spun with the cadence of blue which cast a blipping light into my retina as I stared out the window of the police car. Didn’t even Jesus himself say, “Blessed are the merciful, for they shall be given mercy?” I had learned my lesson with the squirrel. Didn’t they know that I had made my mistake before? I could not do it again. It had been...
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Chapter 1 Sandra Melona knew when she saw the cars backed up on the off -ramp that something other than the usual 6:00 PM rush hour traffic was to blame. She had just finished her shift at Northside Hospital and was busy contemplating what she was going to do for dinner, which usually meant stopping at a McDonalds for a Big Mac. She was driving her co-worker Sue home first, and then would get her burger fix and maybe even squeeze in some Christmas shopping. “Geez,” Sue said...
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Wow! I like erotica, but I've never seen this particular brand. This jury is definitely out to lunch on this one (albeit NOT a lunch of raw oysters and hot sauce), but... Her description is real, seductive in a gross feast of junk food. The chili sauce sliding between her legs is effective. Effective in what, I'm not sure, but I felt a twang of revulsion. I have an issue with the peanut butter. He is watching the peanut butter in her hand and then she rubs her palms along his neck, but then t...
Your message is good. I like the theme of betrayal that you carry through. Punctuation-wise, you use a simplistic, couplet form. However, there are places where you need punctuation at the end of your first line. You also need commas in other places- line three, "time and time," line eight,"Without a word," line seventeen "and at this time,". the poem would be better served without the form you have imposed on it. The punctuation and form of the poem should assist with the reading. It is simi...
This story starts out with some potential but loses focus quickly. As a reader, I found nothing to latch on to the character of Byron Gems. The hook with the candle didn't grab me. I liked the idea of the people of Pickford Estates and how eccentric they are. But when you started into the story of Timmy Two-Arms, I was lost, skimming until I felt that I could get "back" into the story. You keep digressing, and maybe that's the point. But the reader is never firmly engaged in the story at the ...
Wow! I had to read it after I read the title (I was hooked) and now that I have read it, I am slowly digesting any meaning (no pun intended)that a reader might glean from this bizarre, but entertaining piece of work. As a Jewish mother, myself, I want to call my son and say "eat, eat." Hmmm. Technicalities- I'd put a comma after "ten days after." I am guessing that "ambiguously vague" was meant to be together and that you know it is repetition? I'm not sure I get the last line. I like the bal...
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