I am sorry, but there seems to be something missing. Maybe you can read it and find more to add to it. ie; Is the neighbor gone or has something happened to him. If he has moved, is there a new neighbor to test your walls?

this writing is pretty good, but there are a few things to consider. First, what i have read seems to be angey. Is there a light at the end of the tunnel? Second, why did the divorce happen? Was it a mutual thing or one sided? Try to intergrate the reasons into the storie. Finally, what is the reason for the sailboat? Is that your way of rehabilitation. Those are just some of the things I would like to see. I believe it would help us understand what the character is trying to feel.

I have read a lot of the latest writers in this genre, and this is pretty close to some of those that have been on the best seller list. I will look for the next chapter, so I can continue this journey with Mikell and Lauriana