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AGE:
39
LOC: Gibsonton, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 08
LOC: Gibsonton, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 08
I am the author of The Southeastern Adventures ( Action at the Academy ). I am proudly married to my beautiful wife, Stacy, and we have four great children. I love reading many different kinds of books including some romance novels. My favorite books are adventure and fantasy.
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CHAPTER 1 The Southeasten Adventures He had heard of the great ones before, but now he was to meet them. Would they punish him for the life he had chosen, or would they accept him as one of their own? Joshua started to think back, back to the beginning of his long journey that brought him to this moment. He could remember as if it were yesterday. “Wake up; it’s time to get up for school!” Joshua was tired and did not want to go to school. He had been up late the night before and did not get e...
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I have read a lot of the latest writers in this genre, and this is pretty close to some of those that have been on the best seller list. I will look for the next chapter, so I can continue this journey with Mikell and Lauriana
this writing is pretty good, but there are a few things to consider. First, what i have read seems to be angey. Is there a light at the end of the tunnel? Second, why did the divorce happen? Was it a mutual thing or one sided? Try to intergrate the reasons into the storie. Finally, what is the reason for the sailboat? Is that your way of rehabilitation. Those are just some of the things I would like to see. I believe it would help us understand what the character is trying to feel.
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