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AGE:
24
LOC: Detroit, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 16
LOC: Detroit, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 16
“Ducking for apples – change one letter and it’s the story of my life.”
Dorothy Parker
I am a proud writer of Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Horror (mostly grotesque/macabre) fiction. I occasionally write autobiographical poetry, but sometimes I write Sci-fi poetry as well. I get about 99.9% of my writing from my dreams. I dream every night so I figured “Why not?” As you will see, my dreams are disturbing.
Right now, my pet project is my novel-in-progress “Risen”. I have half of the novel completed, but I don’t know what I’ll do when I finish it. I hate re-reading material that I’ve written, and I hate editing. It just takes the fun away from writing.
I plan on getting published very soon. Yes, writing is my hobby, but I figure …
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I found you in forgotten pages of my old journals. Your existence is eroding and turning acidic like the packaging tape I used to bind your picture to the paper. It makes me think I turned you sour. The only thing I have left is a few words phonetic memories sounding out the end of our love. Did I use my feminine wiles to capture a part of you? You are hidden somewhere, trapped between white paper: two dimensional phantoms of words that haunt me, our love professed more clearly in words than ...
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Can you hear me calling? I've been wandering through dark valleys but now your lamb seeks her shepherd to remove the wool from my weary eyes so that we can be re-united. Because, My Love... Your love is like a blindfold, and I need you to guide me better than Cupid did for Psyche. Put me on a path to your love that resembles geodesic paths, and lead me there with more precision than Cupid's arrow. See... The problem is I learned how to love from Pandora's lessons with Aphrodite: I've spent al...
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I still believe in Mr. E’s theory of Gravity: We will be drawn back together eventually. Like a flat, zero curvature universe I obey the laws of Euclidean geometry That says space is infinite So you won’t come back to me. Non-dizzy observers are often waylaid By FTL travelers and plans they’ve made. Your flight path is that of a geodesic But mine resembles a double helix, And though the mathematics of space travel is tedious We could still dance in the bright light of the star Sirius.
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He must have died. He was haunting her thoughts. She shook her head at the thought of him, hoping that the centrifugal motion would dislodge thoughts of him from her head. She reclined back in her chair, watching the sun disappear over the bristly Evergreens in her front yard. Acres of them, branches outstretched to the bleeding colors of the dusk sky. Birds chased each other in the sky, in pursuit of the globular visage of the setting sun. He was a selfish man. He’d left out early that morn...
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Tsukil had never seen a police raid, but she knew that she was about to be in the middle of one. The cops were coming to raid her house. The sky wept for Tsukil. All of the heavy clouds that hung over the city seemed as though they could sense her emotions, and the worse she felt, the harder it rained. The raindrops were quickly beading on the glass of her window, and slowly trickled down. When she caught a glimpse of her reflection in the glass it almost looked like the tears were on her fa...
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I like the sensory details in your writing. There's a lot of energy and passion in your writing. The descriptions that you gave made me seem like I was observing the event as it took place.
Wow! I really liked the story. You did a really good job of grabbing the readers attention at the start of the story. I also felt like you put just the right amount of sensory details into the story to make it believable. By the time that Fulk shows up in the first chapter I had a good sense of the setting. I think that you should combine the first and second chapters and make them one. The end of what is now the second chapter would be the perfect "cliff hanger" ending to start your second c...
First, I'd like to say that by the end of this piece I was curious about what would happen to Kelsa. I really would like to know what happened to her arm. Secondly, I did notice that you have some problems with sentence structure. I think that your biggest problem is ending the sentence. For example: "Her mind made up, she stood, placed both feet squarely on the ground, grabbed the bucket rope with both hands, and pulled as hard as she could." The sentence gets really bogged down after someth...
I like this because of how obscure the meaning in it is...a lot like the internet.
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