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AGE: 23
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 04

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Poetry / architecture
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gutter wombed, i know you. you look like the insides of my cheeks chewed. my fingernails have you trapped beneath them where oceans meet in a haze of crush deafening to witness. pressing in i dont know how you can't see it's love.
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Poetry / architecture
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gutter wombed, i know you. you look like the insides of my cheeks chewed. my fingernails have you trapped beneath them where oceans meet in a haze of crush deafening to witness. pressing in i dont know how you can't see it's love.
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This is relly sweet. What a nice ode to you cat. You could try less repetition on the fact that you cat is a cat becuase we are all really aware tat ou cat is a cat after the first time you told us. Perhaps you could try some personification or some metaphor so it's less of a narrative. Good job.
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