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CHAPTER ONE "The day of sins" Well, Hello I am John Sherman and I'm going to tell you a story about me that no one knows! But keep it to you and only you! Well, It was March 20,2010 and My life is started to get back in track.I think I was around 11 years old. My mom was married a guy named Eric Marken, He is my step-dad. He went into the iraq war but before all that he told me that I have another father, That he wasn't my real dad. I met my real father at my ball game but I really didn't tal...
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Deep Loves I'm fallen like pollen Were all fallen like pollen Love had it encounter pop in a pill to get downer the old wise tale of a towner busy as a vote counter The coldest heart is be healed Its blocks like a shield but someone peeled that shield The deepest thing to love is is someone taking a quiz its only his don't quiz Loving is great Its not fake it really ache John Sherman Copyright ©2008 JohnSherman
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The way You look I see how you walk Only you can unlock My heart never want to be apart Your Eyes are the ocean Your a devotion I love your body You always make me feel disembody I love you, people thinks its taboo The way you move you never need to improve You make me cry when you go by You steal my soul your in control Krista I know you hate me even know that i plea! For your love please belove I love you like never be for like this for! John Fulton Sherman Copyright ©2008 John Fulton Sher...
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Life is Like that Think about the way you live Does it what it thrive Does every man strive to become a one man Ride My life is not right My heart keep a fight with the head's might like a fire and a knight do you want to know? does life go slow? are you lower than low? do you really want to know? love is like mice trying to get a fake piece of rice every heart is cold like an ice but love can melt it twice Can every man love? as a kid shove? want to know if you are be love? John Fulton Sher...
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Death is it Real?: CHAPTER 2 "The Deaths Death" The big dark object came out of the ground."Fire at will!" Corey yelled out while he was shooting.His squad started firing at the object.The giant object came into the light.It was a "Demon". A demon is a giant "Death" alien,It looked like a tiger."Demons" are the biggest,Fastest and strongest "Deaths". The Demon came closer,It look like it wasn't even getting shot at."I'm out" A solider yelled,"OK,Men get in the van" Corey yelled with a deep vo...
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you need a little bit of more work on grammar and everyone can use room for improvement! I am 14 so I can't say alot to say.but improvement on your grammar
You got a great Style with writing and Everyone could use some improvements. You grammar needs little more work.
This is a good poem but you need better grammar and need improvements. I love your writing style. So everyone needs improvements in their writings. I'm a 14 year old so I need improvements.
This is a great start! Everyone can use some improvement. You need work on your grammar, I am only 14 but I write storys and poems. But you can expand the story more but this is great work
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