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AGE: 18
LOC: Denver, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 13

Hey, I’m sixteen, live in northglenn, co. Recently moved here from Joplin, Mo. Don’t have many friends here so i started writing poetry. Then i found this website through myspace and joined and now here i am.

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Snow is falling, Mistletoe's calling, The presents' we're wrapping, On the door the postman's tapping, the baking of cookies, brother's giving nookie's, the family is laughing, the time we are passing, We sit down for the feast, we're all hungry like beast's, We eat drink and are merry, watching movies with fairies', We go to sleep that night, eager for the 'morrow, for the homeless we do feel sorrow, the young one's awake, what a raucous they do make, Everyone in the living room gathers, ali...
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Poetry / Proud....ish
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I've had struggles, and I've had to juggle, through ideas to be a better person, by choosing to do or not to do by not going or going through, I've had the flu as well as the blue's, but I've been occupied by things to do. I've been laughed at and spat at, I've been punched and threw up lunch, I've gone with my gut when in a crunch even if my stomach scrunched. I've argued and squalled, I've fought and brawled, I've been bit and clawed, smacked and verbally attacked. I've tried to keep on tra...
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Poetry / Dudley
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There once was a boy named Dudley, who suddly found himself in a bubbly, (trouble for you not knowing) He neverly thought that he would be caught. (he wasn't to smart) Dudley cried and cried but his parents wouldn't stop making him do chores, he found this a bore, (mopping the floor) He suddly turned sour after an hour, decided that he needed a showe, (oh how he smelt) all of a suddy his dad started using his belt,(cruel man) Told Dudley he wasn't done doing chores! (clean freak) So there dud...
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Poetry / You
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We talked awhil, you made me smile, as if i was a giddy child, This all lasted for quite some time, long enough to write a rhyme. Love is long, love is free, so it must move on from me to you, until the moment that you choose, that i'm not good enough for you. But thats not now, no time soon, maybe once on a blue moon. So for now we are friends, wanting more, i always do, Did you ever drop a clue? Now, i will never know, because you have already chose, somone who wants to slip off your clothe...
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Poetry / Did Ya' Hear?
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Hey did ya' hear? Did ya' hear the news? Somebody else decided to choose, decided to choose peace not war, and now the cops are a bangin' on the door, yellin' and a' screamin' "HE COMITTED TREASON" All he wanted was to reason, Threw him out on the street, beat him till he couldnt stand on his feet, Now tell me that ain't messed up! He didn't wanna get roughed up, Now they say that it didn't happen, "That crazy hippie's just over reactin'" So now the streets are a' crack-a-lackin', With the so...
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Poetry / evil empire
That was impresive, there was a clear message there. I'm not sure what you meant it to be or if you even meant there to be one, but the message i got was of our government in the u.s., To some people it will seem controversial but i think your right.good job
That was really good, i liked how it rhymed and all fit together as one sort of sing song/poem/sentence. I dont know how to describe it. It just flowed and mixed really well. good job!
I thought this was a well thought out story that captivated the senses with the rich details and intriguing characters. In some spots it felt a little jumpy and hard to follow but i kept reading and it all clicked and made sense. The flash back at the begining of the story where it tells how leroy got his name is funny, la, say it with me, roy. good job.
Poetry / Scriptwriter
That was good, I was able to follow it with ease, but i didnt exactly catch onto all of it but i think thats good because it makes you re-read it and try to understand it better, I liked it, good job.
Poetry / Fade
That was good and true, and i think that the stanza your considering should be added it makes it flow so much better because on the original end, it sort of made me want more and that stanza your considering is sort of like the end scene of a movie. good job.
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