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AGE: 16
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 29

15
50% english/jamaican
100% british teenager

so far i’m just really writing for fun, although i’d like to pursue it professionally.

add me if you’d like:
http://www.myspace.com/xproudlymex
jessica0293@hotmail.co.uk

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Tick, tock of the high wall clock, As Time crawls by with a grin on its face. Musky scents mark your place In this dilapidated prison cell. Your heart is filled with tedious yearning And your mind by monotony, As the clock sings its rhythmic pace To its ensnared prison mates. Silence settles like a new winter’s snow, Cold and frigid but not unwelcome. An easy escape from today’s duties Perhaps today will be the last? How does she feel, forever trapped, With no way out except one? ...
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Short Story / The Showman
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Don’t wander near the roads, her father had warned her. The roads were rampant with vagrants and highwaymen, but Alma had a poor sense of direction and a lack of awareness for her surroundings, so it was only natural that she found herself wandering far from the safety of the troupe again. She was a child and often lost herself in silly fantasies, but now Alma imagined herself to be in a fix, and a bad one at that, when she heard the beat of hooves and a whinny at her back. She let her hand s...
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Short Story / The Showman
Version 1
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Don’t wander near the roads, her father had warned her. The roads were rampant with vagrants and highwaymen, but Alma had a poor sense of direction and a lack of awareness for her surroundings, so it was only natural that she found herself wandering far from the safety of the troupe again. She was young and often lost herself in silly fantasies, but now Alma imagined herself to be in a fix, and a bad one at that, when she heard the beat of hooves and a whinny at her back. She let her hand str...
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If I should die And you should live There’s just one thing I would want you to give: Just a little of your time so the memory lives on As nobody would want to be forgotten If I should die And you should live on All I would want is a little gravestone With a few odd flowers and a photo too That much will just have to do If I should die And you should live long Don’t worry for me about where I’ve gone Since I believe there’s neither Hell nor Heaven Just a hole in the ground for my little coffin
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Short Story / Hunter
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It is one of the basic matters of life to be born, to thrive, and to die. It’s a continuous cycle no one can break free of, like how the sun rises and sets just as surely as how time alternates between the drought and monsoon season. You are brought into the world and taught the way to live; you can either follow the advice and thrive, or ignore it and die. Although we all look out for each other in our tight-knit herd, when the hunters arrive and the fear sets in, we don’t have time to warn ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / IS your Realtor Living In the Stone Age?
Amusing, I'll give you that. I've always wondered how exaclty you're meant to judge a house from a little pixel-picture on the net. They never looked quite right to me either. I like your writing style too by the way, it's snazzy - that's the only word I can think for it. Like, snazzy as in the 'gets your attention' kind of snazzy.
Short Story / Let's Go to the Ranch.
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Crossed roads (revision 2)
Right, well you've already drawn me in. Archer's a believable character - seems a little rough around the corners with a questionable background, and it's because of him that I'd like to read Chapter 2. I also love your descriptions. You don't explain to us what's there, it's like you're giving us an eye and letting the reader see for themselves. Very nice. Quite a short chapter, is it part of a novella perhaps? Either way, I'd like to hear about Chapter 2 when it comes in.
Short Story / Gentle Friend
"but of course no one notices a picture is fading until the image is gone." - Too true and lovely wording, this leads into my favourite part. You write beautifully, I like how yor descriptions aren't superflous like most, but simple and almost ethereal; 'gentle darkness', 'soft and gentle death'. It's an interesting take on the topic and I enjoy your view on it. The way you relate it to the ocean in particular, especially after you open the story with it, shows you've obviously thought a lot ...
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Horror / Chao! Haven
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