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PREFACE The reality of kindness in society today is very shortcoming, but when it is practiced it gathers quite a revealing attention span from those who witness its affects. What would one do without the kind care of hospitals or doctors offices? These foundations exist on a basis that kindness be shown within their corridors. At these most highly counted upon areas in today’s society, however, kindness is losing its appeal as well. The reality of kindness has been mostly and synonymously pr...
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PREFACE The reality of kindness in society today is very shortcoming, but when it is practiced it gathers quite a revealing attention span from those who witness its affects. What would one do without the kind care of hospitals or doctors offices? These foundations exist on a basis that kindness be shown within their corridors. At these most highly counted upon areas in today’s society, however, kindness is losing its appeal as well. The reality of kindness has been mostly and synonymously pr...
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THe writer of this selection seems to be very fascinated with Mr. Ellis. You describe this in full detail. I'm sure you noticed you didnt spell organization correctly on page 2, but the flow of the fascination with Mr. Ellis is very intriguing. I feel that you were captivated in meeting him and that this is a meeting that will embrace you for a long time. There are some mispellings in this piece, as I pointed out earlier,but as for the fascination with meeting a famous author, i was able to f...
The last of this poem, is perhaps the strongest line, when the reader learns that depression, not a man, or intruder is knocking at the door, but depression can sometimes seem as if it is an intruder as well. Good use of imagery and contrast.
This poem does grasp the concept who longs for undeniable relationship and effect of a father in their life. I like the references made to his work pants, and things that a father has or that one can see on their father. Perhaps in the last line, which is the most powerful, one gets the impression a father has been lost.
This poem does allow the reader to experience what is felt like before the experience and after the experience which does make it a complete poem in terms of substance and establishment of mood
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